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Book Review: Tempting the Best Man by J. Lynn

Published May 3, 2012 by LS Murphy

Synopsis: Madison Daniels has worshipped her brother’s best friend since they were kids. Everyone thinks she and Chase Gamble would make the perfect couple, but there are two major flaws in their logic. 1) Chase has sworn off relationships of any kind, and 2) after blurring the line between friends and lovers for one night four years ago, they can’t stop bickering.

Forced together for her brother’s wedding getaway, Chase and Madison decide to call a truce for the happy couple. Except all bets are off when they’re forced to shack up in a tacky 70’s honeymoon suite and survive a multitude of “accidents” as the family tries to prove their “spark” can be used than for more than fighting. That is, if they don’t strangle each other first…

The Cover: Sexy, but not a fan of the font.

The First Line: “The ivory invitation with its elegant calligraphy and lacy embellishments felt more like a humiliation time bomb just waiting to blow up in Madison Daniels’s face than a beautiful wedding announcement.” Great visual and really drew me into the story. I like the balance of the “elegant calligraphy and lacy embellishments” with “humiliation time bomb.” The voice explodes in this sentence.

The Good: The heat level in this book is S-C-O-R-C-H-I-N-G. (That’s about ten knots about hot if you’re keeping track.) Madison and Chase have a great chemistry with very real differences. I love that their story doesn’t start here but has a deep history that adds to the drama and romance.

The Bad: The resolution seems a it rushed. I felt like there was a missing confrontation that would’ve added depth to the story.

Recommendation: Jennifer Armentrout (writing as J. Lynn here) is an author to keep your eye on. Tempting the Best Man is a fun, adult romance worth checking out for a quick summer beach read.

5 Questions with J.R. Wagner

Published May 1, 2012 by LS Murphy

J. R. Wagner was born in West Chester, Pennsylvania during a blizzard. The snow made travel by car impossible, so his father called an ambulance when his mother went into labor. The ambulance became stuck at the bottom of their home’s driveway, prompting the dispatch of a fire truck, which towed the ambulance to the hospital where he was born.

Maybe it was this experience that destined J.R. to love adventure. A competitive cyclist, triathlete, mountain biker and adventure racer, he once received a medal for saving a woman’s life during the kayaking section of an adventure race. And the adventure is hard to miss in his debut novel Exiled (Live Oak Book Group, June 5, 2012), the first book in J.R.’s young adult fantasy series The Never Chronicles. He’s got a day job to keep him “grounded”; J.R. helps run his late father’s Downingtown, Pennsylvania floor-covering business.

J.R. first started writing at 10 years old with his sequel to “Return of The Jedi” – the self-proclaimed “Star Wars geek” had lofty aspirations of working with George Lucas on filming the project. In 1990 he began filming his version of “The Lord of The Rings” in his parent’s basement, but the plug was pulled after he nearly burned down the house. Since then the storyteller has also written a full-length science fiction screenplay, a thriller novel and a second screenplay.

After graduating in Kinesiology from Arizona State University, J.R. returned to Downingtown, where his creative fires were re-stoked by his two beautiful daughters.

J.R. also endearingly considers his wife Lisa his muse. It was during their trip to Maine he began writing Exiled.

   Now on the the FIVE QUESTIONS

1. Where did the spark of inspiration come from for Exiled?

I had a vision of the opening chapter and decided to write about it.  Once I finished the chapter, I put the story aside for several months until it started poking the back of my brain telling me it wanted me to write more.  Finally, I obliged and couldn’t stop until the story was told.

2. How many books are planned for The Never Chronicles?

I honestly have no idea. There are two written so far so I imagine there will be at least three.  The story takes me where it wants to go -I am powerless to stop it.  It could decide it’s finished one day and that would be it.

3. What is your solution to writer’s block?

I’m one of those people that people who get writer’s block love to hate. For some reason, it just doesn’t happen to me.

4. What are you reading right now?

Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar ChildrenThe Knife of Never Letting Go(Chaos Walking, #1), and 11/22/63 -I can’t read just one at a time.

5. Finally, Beatles or Rolling Stones?

The Beatles!

Exiled will be released on June 5th. 

Website: TheNeverChronicles.com                

Author blog: whatisthenever.blogspot.com

Cover Reveal: Reaper

Published April 30, 2012 by LS Murphy

Holy snickerdoodles! It’s really happening. I’m so excited to share this! I think I’m hyperventilating. :)

REAPER HAS A COVER! SQUEE!!!!!!

AND HERE IT IS AT LAST!!!

Back of the Book:
There’s no way sixteen year old Quincy Amarante will become the fifth grim reaper. None. Not over her shiny blue Mustang. Her Jimmy Choos. Or her dead body.
She’s supposed to enjoy her sophomore year, not learn about some freaky future Destiny says she has no choice but to fulfill.
It doesn’t take long for Quincy to realize the only way out of the game is to play along especially since Death can find her anyway, anywhere, anytime. And does.
Like when she’s reassuring her friends she wants nothing to do with former best friend Ben Moorland, who’s returned from god-knows-where, and fails. Miserably.
Instead of maintaining her coveted popularity status, Quincy’s goes down like the Titanic.
Maybe … just maybe … that’s okay.
It seems, perhaps, becoming a grim reaper isn’t just about the dead but more about a much needed shift in Quincy’s priorities—from who she thinks she wants to be to who she really is.

Publisher: http://www.jtaylorpublishing.com/books/19

Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/13504857-reaper

Book Review: Black Heart by Holly Black

Published April 26, 2012 by LS Murphy

Synopsis: Cassel Sharpe knows he’s been used as an assassin, but he’s trying to put all that behind him. He’s trying to be good, even though he grew up in a family of con artists and cheating comes as easily as breathing to him. He’s trying to do the right thing, even though the girl he loves is inextricably connected with crime. And he’s trying to convince himself that working for the Feds is smart, even though he’s been raised to believe the government is the enemy.

But with a mother on the lam, the girl he loves about to take her place in the Mob, and new secrets coming to light, the line between what’s right and what’s wrong becomes increasingly blurred. When the Feds ask Cassel to do the one thing he said he would never do again, he needs to sort out what’s a con and what’s truth. In a dangerous game and with his life on the line, Cassel may have to make his biggest gamble yet—this time on love.

The Cover: Meh. I almost missed this on the shelves since they changed to cover design.

The First Line: “My brother Barron sits next to me, sucking the last dregs of milk tea slush noisily through a wide yellow straw.” I love Cassel’s voice. You get an immediate picture of a brother annoyed by his sibling. Since this is the third book in the series, readers will already have a good idea of their relationship. This sentence just punctuates it more.

The Good: Cassel Sharpe is a quick witted young man with a razor tongue and more skills than he has sense. I adore him. There are no easy choices for Cassel and he struggles with being good against being a curse worker. His internal struggles are well written and anyone can relate to his self-doubt.

The Bad: That the series is over. Seriously, Holly Black is brilliant.

Recommendation: Read them all.

5 Questions with Daniel A. Cohen

Published April 24, 2012 by LS Murphy

Daniel A. Cohen was just your average business student. Microeconomics, finance, marketing… you name it, he had to do a PowerPoint presentation on it. One dark and stormy night, he was bitten by the radioactive realization that memorizing business jargon could possibly be the most boring activity known to man.

After gaining eagle-eye vision, abs that could grate cheese, and a talent for imagining things (including his cheese-grating abs), he wrote his first novel and began his epic battle against the formidable business jargon. He continues to fight the good fight by playing saxophone and writing YA fantasy, forever hoping his Veil trilogy will help inspire others to join his cause.

 

Now on to the FIVE QUESTIONS

 

1. Congrats on your novel Masters of the Veil. Where did the spark of inspiration for Sam Lock come from?

I’m a huge sci-fi/ fantasy fan. Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Alvin Maker, Name of the Wind; I love it all. I noticed that there seemed to be a trend in fantasy novels where an outcast is pulled into a fantasy world and finds his place in the new society. I thought it would be really interesting to see what happened if the opposite circumstance occurred. Say… a football playing, popular kid getting pulled into a fantasy world and struggling to find a place there. I couldn’t find it, so I wrote it!

2. Masters of the Veil is the first in a trilogy. How different is the writing process for you now than it was writing the first book?

Oh man, I thought writing the sequel was going to be easier than the creating the first, but that’s not the case at all. With a sequel, us fantasy authors have to keep track of SO much. We have to reveal more of the world, develop the characters further, and keep track of so many interpersonal relationships. I’ve found that writing a sequel requires putting in the effort, but I’m very excited about how “Children of the Veil” is progressing.

3. What advice do you have for aspiring authors?

Keep pushing against the tide of rejection! All it takes is one yes to change your life.

4. What is your solution to writer’s block?

I’ll get back to you when I find it. What’s yours? (PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE) (Actually, my secret is to interview other authors to find out their secrets. L.S.) 

5. Finally, Star Wars or Star Trek?

Neither. Lord of the Rings all the way! But If I have to say something with “STAR” in it, than STARDUST by Neil Gaiman. Pretty much anything by Neil Gaiman is pure genius.

 

Book Review: Hushed by Kelley York

Published April 23, 2012 by LS Murphy

Synopsis: He’s saved her. He’s loved her. He’s killed for her.

Eighteen-year-old Archer couldn’t protect his best friend, Vivian, from what happened when they were kids, so he’s never stopped trying to protect her from everything else. It doesn’t matter that Vivian only uses him when hopping from one toxic relationship to another—Archer is always there, waiting to be noticed.

Then along comes Evan, the only person who’s ever cared about Archer without a single string attached. The harder he falls for Evan, the more Archer sees Vivian for the manipulative hot-mess she really is.

But Viv has her hooks in deep, and when she finds out about the murders Archer’s committed and his relationship with Evan, she threatens to turn him in if she doesn’t get what she wants… And what she wants is Evan’s death, and for Archer to forfeit his last chance at redemption.

The Cover: Love the eyes downcast. Love the blood on the cheek.

The First Line: “‘I feel that suicide notes lose their zing when they drag on too long.’ Archer emphasized the statement with a tap of his foot.” If you don’t get the idea that this is a dark novel by the opening, you probably never will.

The Good: Who would’ve thought that I would sympathize with a serial killer? Seriously? I loved Archer. I wanted to smack Vivian for treating him like she did.

The complexity of the characters is really what drives this story. Nothing is as cut and dry as Archer believes it is. The romance between Archer and Evan is sweet. I found myself rooting for them the entire way.

The Bad: Not much. I wish there would’ve been more from Evan.

Recommendation: If you can stomach it, buy it. Read it. And read it again.

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Visit Kelley’s website: http://www.kelley-york.com/

5 Questions with Tricia Lawrence

Published April 17, 2012 by LS Murphy

Tricia is the “Pacific Northwest branch” of Erin Murphy Literary Agency —born and raised in Oregon, and now lives in Seattle. After 16 years of working as a developmental and production-based copyeditor (from kids book to college textbooks, but mostly college textbooks), she joined the EMLA team in March 2011 as a social media strategist hoping to learn from Erin and Joan about agenting.

As associate agent, Tricia represents middle grade and young adult fiction and nonfiction. She’s looking for strong worldbuilding, wounded narrators, and stories that grab a reader and won’t let go. You can find Tricia’s writing about blogging, Tweeting, Facebooking, and other social media topics (for authors and the publishing industry at large) here.

Now on to the FIVE QUESTIONS

1. Did you always want to be an agent?

I have always wanted to write AND . . . Just like that Coke Zero commercial. I love books and stories and thought I might be a writer when I was young (I wrote pages of terrible prose when I was very young and all through my teen years). But someone told me to learn to edit, I can’t even remember who now, and that’s what I did. And then as the years went by and I edited and wrote, I began to advise writers on their marketing, queries, proposals. See, I can’t just do it myself, I have to meddle in other people’s stuff, too. It was my personality that had to write AND edit AND agent. So, I have always wanted to be an agent, I just didn’t know it until about five years ago.

2. How important is a platform for new and established authors in the 21st century?

Platform is one of those words that makes the veterans in publishing want to cry. I like to say that it is important for writers to be individuals, to be themselves, and to let THAT support them as a writer. Practically speaking, this means what works for that writer over there will not work for you. You may love to blog, the next writer may prefer to put up YouTube videos of themselves talking (same audience, different medium and learning style). To be individual, a writer must be sure of who they are. There is no clone system, although that is a great idea! Every writer has to gauge the energy level they own and then push it. I think the most successful writing “platforms” (I hate that word!) are those that spring organically out of the writer’s work. Call it your life work, your life story, whatever. What is unique about how you see the world that you can use to build on. That’s important. An actual platform that we all could literally fall off of; not so important.

3. What is the most common mistake most authors make when pitching an agent at a conference?

One of my writing buddies wrote this on her blog a few weeks ago: “Don’t treat the agent like they are your one shot to fame and fortune.” I agree! Treat agents like we should be treated—as human beings, who have traveled far to get there, who are probably starving, brain-tired, in need of some peace and quiet, and who are alone in a big crowd. Agents at conferences often feel like they are human targets. Instead of perpetuating that, how about just being friendly? Ask them where they are from and about their kids/animal kids. Ask them about a favorite book they read recently. Ask them questions you would ask someone if you wanted to truly get to know them. That’s powerful.

4. What advice do you have for aspiring authors?

To dig deep, to never give up, to do what you have to do to stay confident because just as others have learned how to write amazing books, so too can you.

5. Finally, Beatles or Rolling Stones?

Oh boy. Well, my dad was a radio dj and so actually, in our house, it was the Birds.

Cover Reveal: After Dark by Emi Gayle

Published April 16, 2012 by LS Murphy

After Dark
The 19th Year Trilogy – Book 1
by Emi Gayle
Release Date: October 31, 2012

What eighteen year old Mac Thorne doesn’t know will probably kill her.

In exactly eight months, five days, three hours and thirteen minutes, Mac has to choose what she’ll be for the rest of her life.

She has no choice but to pick. As a Changeling, it’s her birthright. To Mac, it’s a birthchore. Like going to school with humans, interacting with humans, and pretending to be human during the pesky daylight hours.

Once darkness descends, Mac can change into any supernatural form that exists — which makes her as happy as she can be. That is, until Winn Thomas, the biggest geek in her senior class figures out there’s more to what hides in the dark than most are willing to acknowledge.

In this first of the 19th Year Trilogy, Winn might know more about Mac than even she does, and that knowledge could end their lives, unless Mac ensures the powers-that-be have no choice but to keep him around.

URL: http://www.jtaylorpublishing.com/books/16

http://www.emigayle.com/blog/

Book Review: The Glass Man by Jocelyn Adams

Published April 12, 2012 by LS Murphy

Synopsis: Lila Gray is just a human—at least that’s her mantra when she accidentally topples a building or bends a paranoid local’s gun into modern art. That she can sense and control the minds around her doesn’t prove anything, either. Unwilling to put others at risk, she hides in the wilderness from the beautiful creature who hunts her, one who sees her as his ultimate prize.

Alone, the egocentric Glass Man can kill with a thought. Mated with Lila, he’s a supernatural weapon prepared to annihilate the humans he loathes.

Caught in the Glass Man’s latest scheme, Lila is plunged into a hidden fae realm, faced with a secret birthright and a forbidden romance.

With the Glass Man threatening everyone she loves, can Lila accept who she is in time to end his bloody reign? Or will she succumb to his dark power and become the vehicle of destruction for the human race?

The Cover: There is something cold about this image with all the blues and it suits the title well. Glass is usually cold to the touch. I really like it.

The First Line: “I plunged my knife into a log and pried against the bark, hoping for a squirming morsel to quiet my rumbling stomach.” If you want to write a novel, this is how you start one off. Instantly I know that the MC is a survivor and that she’s not afraid to do whatever it takes.

The Good: Lila Gray is a well-rounded character who isn’t going to take much crap from anyone. I loved her instantly. As her journey unfolds, she never loses who she is even as she’s discovering more about her family. Lila’s strengths really drive this book.

The Glass Man is creeptastic. I love a great villain and he qualifies as one of the better ones I’ve read lately. There is no doubt that this man is pure evil. It’s refreshing.

The Bad: I only had one problem with this book and it’s at the end. Soooooo I’ll keep that to myself. Don’t want to spoil it for anyone. :)

Recommendation: If you like paranormal romance with a lot of heat, then give The Glass Man a go.